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The given picture illustrates the procedure of producing cheese.

The given picture illustrates the procedure of producing cheese. b2DQ6
The given picture illustrates the procedure of producing cheese. As is revealed from the diagrams, overall, it is obvious that the cheese-making process involved various steps, starting from pasteurizing raw milk and ending with ripening cheese. To be more specific, initially, in most cheese making, raw milk is pasteurized to kill harmful bacteria and experience a stage that included standardization and filtration. However, in traditional cheese making, these steps are skipped. Pasteurized milk is then mixed with rennet and inoculated fermenting microorganisms and becomes coagulated curds and whey. After that, curds undergo cutting and stirring, and cooking steps. The cheese-making process continues with draining off whey out of curds, while cooked curds are milled and added salt to enhance the taste and keep the products last longer. Alternatively, at this stage, fresh cheese is produced in two items: cottage and cream cheese. Subsequently, salted curds are shaped into cheese by a mold before being pressed to removed completely additional whey. The final step is when ripening the curds for a while to become ripened cheese.
The
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given
picture illustrates the procedure of producing cheese.

As
is revealed
from the diagrams,
overall
, it is obvious that the cheese-making process involved various steps, starting from pasteurizing raw milk and ending with ripening cheese.

To be more specific,
initially
, in most
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cheese
making, raw milk
is pasteurized
to kill harmful bacteria and experience a stage that included standardization and filtration.
However
, in traditional
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cheese
making, these steps
are skipped
. Pasteurized milk is then mixed with rennet and inoculated fermenting microorganisms and becomes coagulated
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curds
and whey. After that,
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curds
undergo cutting and stirring, and cooking steps.

The cheese-making process continues with draining off whey out of
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curds
, while cooked
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curds
are milled
and
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added
salt to enhance the taste and
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keep
the products last longer.
Alternatively
, at this stage, fresh
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cheese
is produced
in two items: cottage and cream
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cheese
.
Subsequently
, salted
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curds
are shaped
into
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cheese
by a mold
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before
being pressed
to removed completely additional whey. The final step is when ripening the
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curds
for a while to become ripened
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cheese
.
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IELTS academic The given picture illustrates the procedure of producing cheese.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
175 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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