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look at the two maps of a beach hotel at different times.make notes on the key changes in the following areas: accomodation,facilities,recreation

look at the two maps of a beach hotel at different times. make notes on the key changes in the following areas: accomodation, facilities, recreation WqYqe

The modernization process of the beach hotel from 2003 to 2013 has been depicted in the picture below. First of all, the hotels room number has increased and apartments renovated with double stair flats. consequently relocation of the pool and its expansion is notable and there are a numerous seating places for recreational purposes. also the restaurant has demolished and moved to opposite side. one other major improvement is that there was a fence between the beach and the hotel area which in 2013 it has been flatten and there is more places available to relax at seaside as a result there has altered a new water sports center. to sum up the beach hotel has really found its meaning by making the area more suitable to enjoy the sea and has been extended the number of rooms and other hobby facilities.

The modernization process of the beach You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 from 2003 to 2013 has been depicted
 in the picture below. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotels
 room number has increased and apartments renovated with double stair flats. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?consequently,
consequently
 relocation of the pool and its expansion is notable and there are a numerous seating places for recreational purposes. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?also,
also
 the restaurant has demolished and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to opposite side. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOne
one
 other major improvement is that there was a fence between the beach and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 area which in 2013 it has been Consider using a past participle here: "flattened".flattened
flatten
 and Did you mean "there are more places"?there are more places
there is more places
 available to relax at seaside as a result
 there has altered a new water sports center. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTo
to
 sum up the beach You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 has really
 found its meaning by making the area more suitable to enjoy the sea and has been extended
 the number of rooms and other hobby facilities. 