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The given picture illustrates the information about the process of manufacturing pears as packed fruits.

The given picture illustrates the information about the process of manufacturing pears as packed fruits. 6gWr

The given picture illustrates the information about the process of manufacturing pears as packed fruits. Overall, it is clear that it is a quite complex procedure including many stages. It can be seen that process begin with picking raw pears and ends at distributing to customers as a final product. To begin with, pears are collected as raw material and then transported for further processing. Before, checking quality the pears are washed to remove dust. In the next step the pears which are of good quality, stored in the fridge. Afterwards, the pears are weighted and graded. Next, in the peeling process, the other covering of Pears is removed. Probing further, peeled pears are cored and sliced. In the next step, sliced pears are sealed and packed in cans. Cooking is stage comes after sealing in which pears are sterilized. After that, canned pears are labelled and stored. In the eventual stage, these are sent to the supermarket as a final product for selling to Ultimate consumers.

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given
 picture illustrates the information about the process of manufacturing pears as packed fruits.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that it is a quite complex procedure including This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 stages. It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with picking raw pears and ends at distributing to customers as a final product.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, pears are collected
 as raw material and then transported for further
 processing. “Before” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Before
, checking quality the pears are washed
 to remove dust. In the next
 step the pears which are of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 quality, stored in the fridge. Afterwards, the pears are weighted
 and graded. Next
, in the peeling process, the other covering of Pears is removed
.

Probing further
, peeled pears are cored
 and sliced. In the next
 step, sliced pears are sealed
 and packed in cans. Cooking is stage This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 after sealing in which pears are sterilized
. After that, canned pears are labelled
 and stored. In the eventual stage, these are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the supermarket as a final product for selling to Ultimate consumers. 