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The diagram below shows a simple system that turns dirty water into clean water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows a simple system that turns dirty water into clean water. 0K13
The diagram below show a simple process that change dirt water into clean water. This process usually using barrel, drum, a pipe, and two taps. Let me explain how this these equipments work. First, we should place barrel higher than drum, but the position is still close each other. System work by linked the pipe which located in the bottom of barrel and connect in a side of drum. However, the best barrel is made by plastic material that can make it tough enough for shaded filtering materials; sand gravel, and charcoal. Furthermore, these material located in a series from bottom to the top of barrel. In the storage drum do not forget give the tap as output device for fresh water. in the last of process, remember to re-check connection of pipe between them and ensure the setting already rough. Now, equipment installation is complete. Process of filtering starts when dirty water is poured into the barrel. After that, it flows automatically through the filter in the bottom of barrel and move into storage drum. Thus this process in necessity enough time, you should be patient and cannot be fasted while pour water. It needs through every filtering material slowly to ensure that every state has precipitation dirt material. Water is flows little by little until storage drum full. Then, when the tap in the storage is turning on the fresh water ready to served. In summary, this system shows simple mechanism to filtering dirty water. Accordingly, basic equipment to compiler this installation is easy to get around us. This is became cheap and easy solution while we need fresh water and there is no modern water treatment available. Have a nice try.
The diagram below
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that
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dirt
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into clean
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. This
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usually
using
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barrel
,
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drum
, a pipe, and two taps.

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me
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how this these equipments work.
First
, we should place
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barrel
higher than
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drum
,
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but
the position is
still
close each other. System work by linked the pipe which located in the bottom of
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barrel
and connect in a side of
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drum
.
However
, the best
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barrel
is made
by plastic
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material
that can
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make
it tough
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enough
for shaded
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filtering
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materials
; sand gravel, and charcoal.
Furthermore
, these
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material
located in a series from bottom to the top of
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barrel
. In the
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storage
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drum
do not forget give the tap as output device for fresh
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water
.
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the last of
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, remember to re-
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connection of pipe between them and ensure the setting already rough.
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Now
, equipment installation is complete.

Process of
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filtering
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starts
when dirty
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water
is poured
into the
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barrel
. After that, it flows
automatically
through the filter in the bottom of
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barrel
and
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into
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storage
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drum
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this
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process
in necessity
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enough
time, you should be patient and cannot
be fasted
while pour
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water
. It needs through every
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filtering
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material
slowly
to ensure that every state has precipitation dirt
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material
.
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Water
is flows
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little
by
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until
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storage
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full. Then, when the tap in the
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is turning on the fresh
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ready
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In summary, this system
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simple mechanism to
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dirty
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water
.
Accordingly
, basic equipment to compiler this installation is easy to
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around us. This is
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cheap
and easy solution while we need fresh
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water
and there is no modern
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water
treatment available. Have a nice try.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows a simple system that turns dirty water into clean water.

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