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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of export in 2016 compared with 2015

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of export in 2016 compared with 2015 0K1l
Most of every country income is coming from exports. The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. There are 5 types of categories namely, petroleum products, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, agricultural products, and textiles. There is also a table of value percentage changes in every category. Petroleum products reached the third position for the highest percentage change in values. It was increased 3 percent from 60 billion in 2016. Engineered goods reached the second position. It was increased 8, 5 percent from 58 billion in 2016. Agricultural products reached the fourth position for only increased 0, 81 percent in 2016. Textiles reached the first position. It was increased more that 15 percent, it was 15, 24 percent for exact. It was increased from 27 billion to more than 30 billion. Unfortunately, for gems and jewellery. It did not increase. It was rather decreased for 5, 18 percent in 2016.
Most of every country income is coming from exports. The chart below
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the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. There are 5 types of categories
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, engineered
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goods
, gems and
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, and textiles. There is
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Petroleum
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the third
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3
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billion
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goods
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the second
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8, 5
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billion
in 2016. Agricultural
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first
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. Unfortunately, for gems and
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jewellery
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of export in 2016 compared with 2015

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