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The given maps manifest how different a town was before and after a hydroelectric power dam was erected.

The given maps manifest how different a town was before and after a hydroelectric power dam was erected. JVLlj

The given maps manifest how different a town was before and after a hydroelectric power dam was erected. Overall, it is crystal clear that there were several significant alterations made to the town, including the demolition of the forest, the ancient architecture, the area of rare animals and plants, and the irrigated farmlands and the appearance of a huge lake, a hotel, and electricity pylons. In 1990, there existed a forest, an ancient architecture, and area of endangered flora and fauna to the west of the town. However, they all disappeared in 2010 after the building of the dam. Located to the north of the town, a big fishing lake was introduced as a replacement for the irrigated farmlands and the northern half of the river bisecting the town. Originally situated on the west side of the area, the villages were moved southward, making way for a hotel. The last point worth mentioning is that the mountains in the northern part of the town still remained, while the southern ones were replaced with electricity pylons along the banks of the river.

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, including the demolition of the forest, the ancient architecture, the area of rare animals and plants, and the irrigated farmlands and the appearance of a huge lake, a hotel, and electricity pylons.

In 1990, there existed a forest, an ancient architecture, and area of endangered flora and fauna to the west of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
. However
, they all disappeared in 2010 after the building of the dam. Located to the north of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
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big
 fishing lake was introduced
 as a replacement for the irrigated farmlands and the northern half of the river bisecting the town.

Originally
 situated on the west side of the area, the villages were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 southward, making way for a hotel. The last point worth mentioning is that the mountains in the northern part of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
still
 remained, while the southern ones were replaced
 with electricity pylons along the banks of the river. 