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The given maps demonstrate the remarkable changes of the Southwest airport before and after being upgraded next year.

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The given maps demonstrate the remarkable changes of the Southwest airport before and after being upgraded next year. As can be seen from maps, the airport will have many obvious changes in terms of enhancement and addition of facilities to offer more convenience to the customers. It is clear that the airport departures and arrivals after the renovation will be changed into 2 aisles instead of one as before. Meanwhile, the passport control and security area will be remained the same. In addition, next year the airport will be upgraded with added amenities to meet customer needs such as the bag storage area on the left hand side, which is currently the check-in counter. Furthermore, the previous coffee shop near the passport control area will be located near the departure hall entrance to make room for the check-in area and one more cafe will be added next to the passport control customers. Other modern facilities such as ATM and car hire are also added in the lower right corner. It is predicted that in future plans, the most notable changes will be the replacement of the walkway with sky trains and the branching of the corridor to add ten more gates for passengers. Finally, in the right corner near the security control area, the shops will be built as a shopping area.
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changes
of the Southwest
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airport
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before
and after
being upgraded
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year.

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seen
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airport
will have
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many
obvious
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changes
in terms of enhancement and addition of facilities to offer more convenience to the customers.

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clear
that the
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airport
departures and arrivals after the renovation will be
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changed
into 2 aisles
instead
of one as
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before
. Meanwhile, the passport
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control
and security
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area
will
be remained
the same.
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,
next
year the
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airport
will
be upgraded
with
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added
amenities to
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meet
customer needs such as the bag storage
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area
on the
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left hand
side, which is
currently
the
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check
-in counter.
Furthermore
, the previous coffee shop near the passport
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control
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area
will
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near the departure hall entrance to
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room for the
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check
-in
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area
and one more
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will be
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added
next
to the passport
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control
customers. Other modern facilities such as ATM and car hire are
also
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added
in the lower right corner. It
is predicted
that in future plans, the most notable
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changes
will be the replacement of the walkway with sky trains and the branching of the corridor to
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add
ten more gates for passengers.
Finally
, in the right corner near the security
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control
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area
, the shops will
be built
as a shopping
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.
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IELTS academic The given maps demonstrate the remarkable changes of the Southwest airport before and after being upgraded next year.

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222 words
6.0
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