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The table depicts the different items that the customer purchasing in 5 countries in 2002.

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The table depicts the different items that the customer purchasing in 5 countries in 2002. Overall, the tables illustrate 3 types of Food/ Drinks/ Tobacco, Clothing/ Footwear, and Leisure/Education for a totally is around 111, 33, 14 percent and 5 countries which is Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey. First, the percentages of Food/ Drinks/ Tobacco in 5 countries are 28. 91, 16. 36, 18. 80, 15. 77, 32. 14 percent so the amount of it are around 111 percent. Moreover, the fully of Clothing/Footwork 33 percent, which is 6. 43, 9, 6. 51, 5. 40, and 6. 63 percent in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey. Second, the least one of the tables as Leisure/ Education have the highest level of it in Turkey are 4. 35 percent higher than Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey for 2, 1, 2, and 1 percent. In addition, the least of Leisure/ Education is 1. 98 percent for this reason the completely of Leisure/ Education is 14 per cent.
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items that the customer purchasing in 5 countries in 2002.

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and 5 countries which is Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey.

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the amount of it are around 111
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, which is 6. 43, 9, 6. 51, 5. 40, and 6. 63
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in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey.

Second, the least one of the tables as Leisure/ Education have the highest level of it in Turkey are 4. 35
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higher than Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey for 2, 1, 2, and 1
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, the least of Leisure/ Education is 1. 98
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the completely of Leisure/ Education is 14 per cent.
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