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The graph illustrates how often americans went to fast food restaurant between2003

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The graph illustrates how often americans went to fast food restaurant between2003 and 2013 particularly in 2003, 2006 and 2013. First of all, about 4 percent of the people in the USA use to eat at least once a day in a fast-food restaurant in 2003 which is more than people use to in 2006 and 2013. In 2006 and 2013 3 percent of the americans ate daily at a fast-food restaurant. Afterwards it is clear that many more people ate at fast-food restaurant several times a week as the graph shows that between 2003 and 2013 between 16 percent and 20 percent of the American population use to go to that kind of restaurant more than once a week. The document shows that most people in the USA use to go once a week or once or twice a month in fast-food restaurant. In 2003 about a third of the americans admitted going to a fast-food once a week and the same percentage once or twice a week. But in 2013 only 27 percent admitted going there once a week and over a third once or twice a month. Then about 12 percent said they went a few times a year in 2003 which is less than in 2006 and 2013. In 2006 and 2013 15 percent ate few times a year in fast-food. Lastly less people never ate in a fast-food in 2006 and 2013 than in 2003, in 2003 5 percent of the people in the USA never went to fast-food when only 4 percent in 2006 and 2013 This graph shows the evolution of the fast-food restaurant popularity in the USA in a 10 year period, and we can see that fast-food restaurant were very popular among the americans between 2003 and 2013 as only a small percentage of the population never went to fast-foods.
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates how often americans went to fast food restaurant between2003

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