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The charts demonstrate the regular rate in how three types of both unhealthy and healthy diets were consumed in one-day meals in the USA.

The charts demonstrate the regular rate in how three types of both unhealthy and healthy diets were consumed in one-day meals in the USA. MrLka
The charts demonstrate the regular rate in how three types of both unhealthy and healthy diets were consumed in one-day meals in the USA. It can be seen that, Sodium and Saturated fat tended to be absorbed in Dinner while Snacks provided so much sugar added than normal. On the other hand, our Breakfast contributed the least amount of nutrients over the whole day. Looking in the details, the large proportion of mineral belongs to Sodium that were taken in Dinner, about 43%, compared to the smallest one when eating Snacks or Breakfast. Besides, not only Sodium but Saturated fat also was included in Dinner with a high rate of 37%, whereas Added sugar were found in Snacks, the second largest percentage of 42% and Dinner had just 23% Added sugar. On the other hand, all the smallest amounts of three types of food were consumed in Breakfast, just as one third as the average portion in Dinner with Sodium and Saturated fat; in Snacks with Added sugar, 14% and 16% sequentially. Lunch maintained a suitable allotment with all nourishments, just approximately 30% each meal and even 19% with Added sugar.
The charts demonstrate the regular rate in how three types of both unhealthy and healthy diets
were consumed
in one-day meals in the USA.

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that, Sodium and Saturated
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On the other hand
, our Breakfast contributed the least amount of nutrients over the whole day.

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, the large proportion of mineral belongs to Sodium that
were taken
in
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Dinner
, about 43%, compared to the smallest one when eating
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Snacks
or Breakfast.
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only
Sodium
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Saturated
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with a high rate of 37%, whereas
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sugar
were found
in
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Snacks
, the second largest percentage of 42% and
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had
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23%
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sugar.

On the other hand
, all the smallest amounts of three types of food
were consumed
in Breakfast,
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just
as one third as the average portion in
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Dinner
with Sodium and Saturated
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; in
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Snacks
with
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sugar
, 14% and 16%
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. Lunch maintained a suitable allotment with all
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