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The chart shows the information relating to people within lS-minute drive service in a particular region in UK. It also compares the peopre riving in urban areas and people living in rural areas. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below.

The chart shows the information relating to people within lS-minute drive service in a particular region in UK. It also compares the peopre riving in urban areas and people living in rural areas. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below. 7ekA
The bar graph illustrates the data about people in 15 minutes driving in a specific reason in the United Kingdom, and also in this graph compared to a native of urban areas and native of rural areas. Overall it can be seen that all citizens of cities reach their every destination within 15 minutes by drive service Whereas some people from a village not reach post office and primary school in 15 minutes driving. Looking at the bar graph in more detail, it is evident that the number of urban areas citizen who reaches 100% secondary school within 15 minutes drive, as well as rural areas citizen also reach. However, people of in cities 100% reach primary school in 15 minutes through drive but people of village areas only 65% get Primary School in 15 minutes driving. Turning to the remaining two data sets, all citizen of the Metropolitan Area easily reach the post office only in 15 minutes of service of drive, in contrast, 95% of frontiers people reach the post office in 15 minutes drive. For doctor reason, both people countryside and metropolis are rich in 15 minutes by driving
The bar graph illustrates the data about
people
in 15 minutes driving in a specific reason in the United Kingdom, and
also
in this graph compared to a native of urban
areas
and native of rural areas.

Overall
it can be
seen
that all
citizens
of cities
reach
their every destination within 15 minutes by
drive
service Whereas
some
people
from a village not
reach
post office and primary
school
in 15 minutes driving.

Looking at the bar graph in more detail, it is evident that the number of urban
areas
citizen
who
reaches
100% secondary
school
within 15 minutes
drive
,
as well
as rural
areas
citizen
also
reach
.
However
,
people
of in cities 100%
reach
primary
school
in 15 minutes through
drive
but
people
of village
areas
only
65%
get
Primary
School
in 15 minutes driving.

Turning to the remaining two data sets, all
citizen
of the Metropolitan
Area
easily
reach
the post office
only
in 15 minutes of service of
drive
,
in contrast
, 95% of frontiers
people
reach
the post office in 15 minutes
drive
. For doctor reason, both
people
countryside and metropolis are rich in 15 minutes by
driving
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IELTS academic The chart shows the information relating to people within lS-minute drive service in a particular region in UK. It also compares the peopre riving in urban areas and people living in rural areas. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below.

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4 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
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