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The given map show the information about the village which is located near the sea and its also so some changes which occurred in 2010.

The given map show the information about the village which is located near the sea and its also so some changes which occurred in 2010. BgXKa
Overall it can be concluded face become modern and functional for the people how was something had sacrificed The given map illustrate information regarding the changes in the Costa village in the given 30 years. The first match respect the cost of village in 1980 front of the sea show one road left side of the road there were hotel Holiday Cottage for spend that we can and Mars East side of the there was Woodland right side of the road there was a big river on the right side of the river there was a eastbank and on opposite side there were tea room and send room. They have been some changes which can be seen in the village 2010 nearest bank there was a new holiday Cottage for people in the central there were my red facility open for people suggest retirement village and Boat Club restaurant and Hotel open instead of tea room and sand room there was also build a new round around the river and Bridge was also built which was connected to the retirement village on a website of the mass and holiday Cottage remove and permanent house build their wooden was also any more and Golf Course conduct their. Overall it can be concluded that place become modern and functional for the people however something had sacrificed.
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in 1980 front of the sea
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side of the road there were hotel Holiday Cottage for spend that we can and Mars East side of the there was Woodland right side of the road there was a
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and on opposite side there were tea room and
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village
2010 nearest bank there was a new holiday Cottage for
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in the central there were my red facility open for
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suggest retirement
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village
and Boat Club restaurant and Hotel open
instead
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build a new round around the river and Bridge was
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was connected
to the retirement
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on a website of the mass and holiday Cottage remove and permanent
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build their wooden was
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and Golf Course conduct their.
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IELTS academic The given map show the information about the village which is located near the sea and its also so some changes which occurred in 2010.

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224 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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