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Describe your first time it’s SCHOOL. Where Happened. Explain how you feel on the day

Describe your first time it’s SCHOOL. Where Happened. Explain how you feel on the day OyOqM

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 from sixth grade to 10th grade You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
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friend
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soon and
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explained
 me about this course and the locations This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 me the Possible typo: you repeated a wordlibrary
library library
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 he also
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section section


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 happy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 to my home I made This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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friends
 to me they also
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very
 nice person work homework to play