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The graph shows the distribution of population in north west regions for 1900 to 2050.

The graph shows the distribution of population in north west regions for 1900 to 2050. yD1o3
The bar graph compares the population in north west regions from 1900 to 2000 along with projection till 2050. The percentage of population living in villages decreased from 65 % in 1900 to 20 % in 2000. It may fall to 10% 2050. Between 1900 and 1950, the proportion of Sub Urban dwellers doubled, after that this figure remained constant at 20% till 2000. Going by speculation, the ratio of Individuals in Sub Urban areas claim to 55% in 2050. Further more, analysis of the chat reveals that the percentage of Urban night's froze at 35 % between 1900 and 1950. Following this, the number went up to 6% in 2000. The percentage projected to fall by 25% in 2050. Overall, it is evident that people were shifting from Rural to Urban areas in the past, but in the future more people would prefer to live in Urban areas.
The bar graph compares the population in
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north west
regions from 1900 to 2000 along with projection till 2050.

The percentage of population living in villages decreased from 65 % in 1900 to 20 % in 2000. It may fall to 10% 2050. Between 1900 and 1950, the proportion of Sub
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Urban
dwellers doubled, after that this figure remained constant at 20% till 2000. Going by speculation, the ratio of Individuals in Sub
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Urban
areas claim to 55% in 2050.

Further
more, analysis of the chat reveals that the percentage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Urban
night's froze at 35 % between 1900 and 1950. Following this, the number went up to 6% in 2000. The percentage projected to fall by 25% in 2050.

Overall
, it is evident that
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people
were shifting from Rural to
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Urban
areas in the past,
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but
in the future more
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people
would prefer to
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live
in
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areas.

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