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The given map presents the full layouts of a certain area in the past and now. Report the main features of the maps.

The given map presents the full layouts of a certain area in the past and now. Report the main features of the maps. alJxY
The following map depicts the entire layout of a specific place in the past and now. Overall, the current plan displays a major development of living facilities, including houses and apartments, as well as the removal of the fishing business construction. There are more houses in the North-Western side presently than there were in 1995. A golf course and tennis courts were built in place of the farmland and woodland park. Moving to the south, a restaurant has opened on the same spot where a shop once stood. Although the hotel's location has not altered, a parking lot has been built adjacent to it. On the other side of the street, the fish market is no longer visible because the area has been taken over by flats. Similarly, the fishing port has been relocated to a safe distance from the water. Meanwhile, the cafe remains in the same location as it was in 1995.
The following map depicts the entire layout of a specific place in the past and
now
.
Overall
, the
current
plan displays a major development of living facilities, including
houses
and apartments,
as well
as the removal of the fishing business construction.

There are more
houses
in the North-Western side
presently
than there were in 1995. A golf course and tennis courts
were built
in place of the farmland and woodland park.

Moving to the south, a restaurant has opened on the same spot where a shop once stood. Although the hotel's location has not altered, a parking lot has
been built
adjacent to it. On the other side of the street, the fish market is no longer visible
because
the area has
been taken
over by flats.
Similarly
, the fishing port has
been relocated
to a safe distance from the water. Meanwhile, the
cafe
remains in the same location as it was in 1995.
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IELTS academic The given map presents the full layouts of a certain area in the past and now. Report the main features of the maps.

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