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The bar chart illustrates how much four areas are invested in billions of euros by various organizations. Overall, organization B tops the group of significant investment by staff training and research. Conversely, organization D and E have the least investment. The number of organization B started at nearly 1. 9 billions euros in staff training and reach at 1. 6 billions euros in research, while machinery has invest least, just about 0. 9 billions euros, followed by an significant increase to 1. 4 billions euros of building in organization A. Similar changes can be seen in the figure for staff training in organization C, D, E, respectively, which fluctuate in the range from 0. 8 billions euros to almost 0. 9 units. Nearly 1. 3 billions euros in machinery invest by organization C, approximately 1 billions euros in building.
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B tops the group of significant investment by staff training and research.
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D and E have the least investment. The number of
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B
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IELTS academic Bar chart below shon of the air pollution in the biggest city

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  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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