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The graphs show changes in spending habits of society between 1971 and 2001 in the United Kingdom.

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The graphs illustrate changes in spending habits of society between 1971 and 2001 in the United Kingdom. Overall, at the beginning of the period, English people’s spending habit was the most a food, secondly, they were spending habits on a car. In comparison, at the end of the period, society was interested in cars more than others. It can be seen, firstly, during 30 years, spending cars of people’ habit dramatically rose two fifths. Secondly, in 2001, people were becoming for spending computers more than 10% 1971’s data. Thirdly, Restaurant of spending habits population’ increased (14%) more than half comprised past. In contrast, Population’s spending habits for food and book were dramatically dropped 14% and 1% respectively in 2001, whereas Spending on furniture and petrol were remaining approximately one in ten these terms.
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of society between 1971 and 2001 in the United Kingdom.

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on a car.
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rose two fifths.
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computers more than 10% 1971’s data.
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population’ increased (14%) more than half comprised past.

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for food and book were
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on furniture and petrol were remaining approximately one in ten these terms.

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