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Holiday destination of UK in 1991

Holiday destination of UK in 1991 PRE8g
The table highlits result of an online survey of 1000 people where they were asked about their first-choise holiday accommodation. Overall, it is interesting to note that in questionnaire was shown eight holiday accommodations and the number-one place was hotel and the least place was rented apartment. As we mentioned above, top of the list was hotel with 34% people. he next most successful accommodation to stay was bed and breakfast where it was a slight as popular as motor home, with 170 and 160 people respectively. 10 % of people said they prefer to stay with friends, where it was 2% higher than hostel (at 8%). Accommodations campsite and cottage were nearly in same  rate, at 45 and 50 people in turn. The last place was given to rented apartment with very small percentage, at 1, 5%, and 4% of the people completed other kind accommodations.
The table
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result of an online survey of 1000
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people
where they
were asked
about their
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first-choise


holiday accommodation.

Overall
, it

is interesting to note that in questionnaire
was shown
eight holiday

accommodations and the number-one place was hotel and the least place
was rented
apartment.

As we mentioned

above, top of the list was hotel with 34%
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next
most successful accommodation

to stay
was bed
and breakfast where it was a slight as popular as motor home,

with 170 and 160
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people
respectively
. 10 % of
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people
said they prefer to stay with

friends, where it was 2% higher than hostel (at 8%). Accommodations campsite

and cottage were
nearly
in same
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rate, at

45 and 50
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people
in turn. The last place was
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IELTS academic Holiday destination of UK in 1991

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
147 words
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