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The table highlits result of an online survey of 1000 people where they were asked about their first-choise holiday accommodation. Overall, it is interesting to note that in questionnaire was shown eight holiday accommodations and the number-one place was hotel and the least place was rented apartment. As we mentioned above, top of the list was hotel with 34% people. he next most successful accommodation to stay was bed and breakfast where it was a slight as popular as motor home, with 170 and 160 people respectively. 10 % of people said they prefer to stay with friends, where it was 2% higher than hostel (at 8%). Accommodations campsite and cottage were nearly in same  rate, at 45 and 50 people in turn. The last place was given to rented apartment with very small percentage, at 1, 5%, and 4% of the people completed other kind accommodations.
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result of an online survey of 1000
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holiday accommodation.

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, it

is interesting to note that in questionnaire
was shown
eight holiday

accommodations and the number-one place was hotel and the least place
was rented
apartment.

As we mentioned

above, top of the list was hotel with 34%
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next
most successful accommodation

to stay
was bed
and breakfast where it was a slight as popular as motor home,

with 170 and 160
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people
respectively
. 10 % of
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said they prefer to stay with

friends, where it was 2% higher than hostel (at 8%). Accommodations campsite

and cottage were
nearly
in same
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rate, at

45 and 50
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IELTS academic Holiday accommodation in uk

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4 paragraphs
147 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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