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The diagram shows the process of cloned embryo in sheep.

The diagram shows the process of cloned embryo in sheep. G9JyQ

The diagram illustrates the process of embryo cloning in sheep. Overall, the embryo is developed from fusion of DNA and two cells taken from two different female sheeps. It has seven steps. It starts from production of different cell from two various female sheeps and ends with cloning of sheep A. First of all, body cell and egg cell are taken from female sheep A and from sheep B. Deoxyribose Nucleic Acid is extracted from body cell of sheep A and Nucleus is removed from egg cell which is given by sheep B. The extraction of DNA from sheep A fused with egg cell of sheep B. Following that, embryo is developed from fused cell of both of sheeps. After that, embryo is placed in the uterus of foster mother with the help of expert vetinary doctor. The embryo which is placed in the sheep C. It gives the birth to the lamb. Lamb is cloned of sheep A. At last, baby of sheep is cloned from embryo which placed in uterus of sheep C.

The diagram illustrates the process of embryo cloning in sheep.

Overall
, the embryo is developed
 from fusion of DNA and two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cells
 taken from two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 female Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "sheep", the plural form of the noun 'sheep'?sheepsheetssleepssweepsseepssteeps
sheeps
. It has seven steps. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 from production of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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cell
 from two various female Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "sheep", the plural form of the noun 'sheep'?sheepsheetssleepssweepsseepssteeps
sheeps
 and ends with cloning of sheep A.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, body You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cell
 and egg You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cell
are taken
 from female sheep A and from sheep B. Deoxyribose Nucleic Acid is extracted
 from body You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cell
 of sheep A and Nucleus is removed
 from egg You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cell
 which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 by sheep B. The extraction of DNA from sheep A fused with egg You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cell
 of sheep B.

Following that, embryo is developed
 from fused You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cell
 of both of Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "sheep", the plural form of the noun 'sheep'?sheepsheetssleepssweepsseepssteeps
sheeps
. After that, embryo is placed
 in the uterus of foster mother with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of expert Possible spelling mistake found.seminaryveterinary
vetinary
 doctor. The embryo which is placed
 in the sheep C. It gives the birth to the lamb. Lamb is cloned
 of sheep A. At last, baby of sheep is cloned
 from embryo which placed in uterus of sheep C. 