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The given map illustrates the Grange Park when it was inaugurated in 1920 and the changes that have been made to its map, until today.

The given map illustrates the Grange Park when it was inaugurated in 1920 and the changes that have been made to its map, until today. O6Rbj
The given map illustrates the Grange Park when it was inaugurated in 1920 and the changes that have been made to its map, until today. Overall, it is clear from the given maps that a lot of changes have been carried out in the park since 1920. There were five seating areas on all sides of the park and three rose gardens to the north and south. In the middle of the park, a fountain and stage for musicians were placed. There was also a pond of water to the far-right side of the park and a glasshouse next to the Eldon Street entrance on the south. There have been numerous changes to the map since 1920. Only the entrances and a rose garden remain unchanged. Two of the rose gardens facing each other have been abolished. In place of the fountain, a new rose garden has been placed with seating areas to all sides of it. The stage for musicians has been removed and an Amphitheatre for concerts has been constructed facing the rose garden in the middle. In addition to that, a children’s play area and a water feature have been developed in place of the pond and glasshouse respectively.
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since 1920. There were five seating areas on all sides of the
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rose
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gardens
to the north and south. In the middle of the
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park
, a fountain and stage for musicians
were placed
. There was
also
a pond of water to the far-right side of the
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park
and a glasshouse
next
to the Eldon Street entrance on the south.

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since 1920.
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rose
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remain unchanged. Two of the
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rose
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facing each other have
been abolished
. In place of the fountain, a new
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rose
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garden
has
been placed
with seating areas to all sides of it. The stage for musicians has
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and an
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IELTS academic The given map illustrates the Grange Park when it was inaugurated in 1920 and the changes that have been made to its map, until today.

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