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Describe the changes in the island

Describe the changes in the island j8V01

The maps demonstrate the changes which occurred in an island before and after the construction. Overall, it is immediately apparent that the new tourist facilities were built, for instance, the restaurant, the reception, and the accommodation area. In addition, the palm trees remained at the same location in the island. Although the beach area stayed on the same place in the west of the island and tourists can utilize it for swimming, the accommodation area was constructed in the east of it around the palm trees. Moreover, the reception was established in the middle of the island and it is connected to the restaurant and the residential area by the vehicle track and the footpath. Furthermore, the pier was built in the south of the island for staying ships and boats. In the northeast of the area, nine buildings were established around a circle and for increasing the safety of pedestrians, there is not any vehicle track in this area. Moreover, the restaurant was constructed In the north of the island.

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changes
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island
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before
 and after the construction. Overall
, it is immediately apparent that the new tourist facilities were built
, for instance
, the restaurant, the reception, and the accommodation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. In addition
, the palm trees remained at the same location The usual preposition for "island" is "on" not "in".  Revise: "on the island".on the island
in the island
.

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area
 stayed on the same place in the west of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 and tourists can utilize it for swimming, the accommodation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
was constructed
 in the east of it around the palm trees. Moreover
, the reception was established
 in the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 and it is connected
 to the restaurant and the residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 by the vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 and the footpath.

Furthermore
, the pier was built
 in the south of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 for staying ships and boats. In the northeast of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, nine buildings were established
 around a circle and for increasing the safety of pedestrians, there is not any vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. Moreover
, the restaurant was constructed
 In the north of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. 