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Percentage on different things by five countries

Percentage on different things by five countries PLRA2
The information about expenditure by five different nations on various items is depicted by the table chart. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Overview, it is noticed that maximum income has been spent on housing and food and beverages but minimum was on clothing and entertainment. By analyzing the table it is clear that the marginal difference has been observed for spending money on food and drinks in France and UK with 2%. Moreover, Turkey, Spain and German had spent 36%, 31% and 22% of the salary on the same item. Whereas, on housing, Spain and Turkey has spent only 18 and 20% of their income. Furthermore, it has been seen that income spended on clothing by five countries remained under 15%, however, 19% income was spent on entertainment by Germans which was highest among all other four nations.
The information about expenditure by five
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different
nations on various items
is depicted
by the table chart. The data has
been calibrated
in percentage.

Overview, it
is noticed
that maximum income has been
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spent
on housing and food and beverages
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but
minimum was on clothing and entertainment.

By analyzing the table it is
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clear
that the marginal difference has
been observed
for spending money on food and drinks in France and UK with 2%.
Moreover
, Turkey, Spain and German had
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spent
36%, 31% and 22% of the salary on the same item. Whereas, on housing, Spain and Turkey has
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spent
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only
18 and 20% of their income.

Furthermore
, it has been
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seen
that income
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spended
on clothing by five countries remained under 15%,
however
, 19% income was
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spent
on entertainment by Germans which was highest among all other four nations.
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IELTS academic Percentage on different things by five countries

Academic
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4 paragraphs
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