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The given map details information about renovated version of beachfront area in Australia between 2 years 1950 and present.

The given map details information about renovated version of beachfront area in Australia between 2 years 1950 and present. 9LE7j
The given map details information about renovated version of beachfront area in Australia between 2 years 1950 and present. Looking from overall perspective, the noticeable redevelopment is observed in the west cost of beach where the new leisure time activities, restaurant and surf club are constructed. To begin with, according to the expansion of the vehicle road, new car park is opened up in the place of playground. In 1950, vehicle access was ended up in the second car park, but present it lead to lighthouse. In addition, surf club erected by the beach and 25 m pool which is near to it still remain unchanged. However, near to the west side of beach, 25 m pool enlarged into 50 metress.
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information about renovated version of beachfront area in Australia between 2 years 1950 and present.

Looking from
overall
perspective, the noticeable redevelopment
is observed
in the west cost of beach where the new leisure time activities, restaurant and surf club
are constructed
.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, according to the expansion of the vehicle road, new car park
is opened
up in the place of playground. In 1950, vehicle access
was ended
up in the second car park,
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but
present it lead to lighthouse.
In addition
, surf club erected by the beach and 25 m pool which is near to it
still
remain unchanged.

However
, near to the west side of beach, 25 m pool enlarged into 50
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metress
.
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IELTS academic The given map details information about renovated version of beachfront area in Australia between 2 years 1950 and present.

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121 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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