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The graph below shows the number of graduate from the higher college of technology women and men college in 1999

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The bargraph shows the information about the number of graduates from the hct college men and women in 1999It is clear that the number of female graduates are higher than the male graduate in five different country in dubai the number of females is approximately 550 is consider greater than the number of male students only 425 In case abu dhabi country there are minor difgerence in figure of male graduates and female degree holderIn al ain country is women graduate is double than the male graduates it was 225 and 125 respectively. sharjahis the gap of 25 people between boys and girls. same case in the ras al khaimah is men's degree certificate holder are 100 and the women graduate is roughly 180.
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