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The line graph gives the information about the medium number of United Kingdom commuters travelling daily by car, bus or train from 1970 to 2030.

The line graph gives the information about the medium number of United Kingdom commuters travelling daily by car, bus or train from 1970 to 2030. 25A3k
The line graph gives the information about the medium number of United Kingdom commuters travelling daily by car, bus or train from 1970 to 2030. the average commuters travelling in car and train showed steady but significant rise over the period, the commuters travelling in bus was experienced downward trend throughout the period. In 1970 the average commuters travelling in United Kingdom through car and train was approximately five million and two million. people who are travelling in car has increased rapidly throughout the period and touched the highest point over nine million in 2030 whereas people travelling in train has a gradual increase, from 2000 to 2010 it is constant and started increased and exceeding bus travelers in 2005, at the end of the period it has gone up to five million. United Kingdom commuters travelling in bus has over four million in 1970 it being constant for next ten years and started decreasing throughout the period, by 2030 it has went down to three million number of commuters.
The line graph gives the information about the medium number of United Kingdom
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from 1970 to 2030.

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train
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, the
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commuters
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travelling
in bus
was experienced
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travelling
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has a gradual increase, from 2000 to 2010 it is constant and
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increased and exceeding bus travelers in 2005, at the
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it has gone up to five million.

United Kingdom
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