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The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filtrate is constructed and how it functions produced clean water.

The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filtrate is constructed and how it functions produced clean water. 53KGn
The provided procedure elucidates how to work a simple water filter as well as how it give clean drinking water by various functions. Overall, a quick glance at the process reveals that, the starting of the process opened lid and fill the impure water in filter machine. Moreover, at the end of all processing it provide a pure water in one other container by tap. First and foremost, impure water is put into metal container with a top. In the metal container there are three filtering layers; namely- sand, charcoal, gravel, in which at the bottom must be separated by gravel. Secondly, sand is divided at the top of the container. Last but not the least, charcoal should be placed at the middle. Furthermore, in this container connected with other tank by pipe which is tranfermed water into ground level to one huje jar. Eventually, water store in this tank and people easily used it by tap.
The provided procedure elucidates how to work a simple
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water
filter
as well
as how it
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give
clean drinking
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water
by various functions.

Overall
, a quick glance at the process reveals that, the starting of the process opened lid and fill the impure
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water
in filter machine.
Moreover
, at the
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end
of all processing it provide a pure
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water
in one other
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container
by tap.

First
and foremost, impure
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water
is put
into metal
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container
with a top. In the metal
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container
there are three filtering layers;
namely
- sand, charcoal, gravel, in which at the bottom
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must
be separated
by gravel.
Secondly
, sand
is divided
at the top of the
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container
. Last
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but
not the least, charcoal should
be placed
at the middle.

Furthermore
, in this
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container
connected with other tank by pipe which is
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tranfermed
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water
into ground level to one
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huje
jar.
Eventually
,
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water
store in this tank and
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people
easily
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used
it by tap.

IELTS academic The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filtrate is constructed and how it functions produced clean water.

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