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The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filtrate is constructed and how it functions produced clean water.

The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filtrate is constructed and how it functions produced clean water. 53KGn

The provided procedure elucidates how to work a simple water filter as well as how it give clean drinking water by various functions. Overall, a quick glance at the process reveals that, the starting of the process opened lid and fill the impure water in filter machine. Moreover, at the end of all processing it provide a pure water in one other container by tap. First and foremost, impure water is put into metal container with a top. In the metal container there are three filtering layers; namely- sand, charcoal, gravel, in which at the bottom must be separated by gravel. Secondly, sand is divided at the top of the container. Last but not the least, charcoal should be placed at the middle. Furthermore, in this container connected with other tank by pipe which is tranfermed water into ground level to one huje jar. Eventually, water store in this tank and people easily used it by tap.

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water
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Overall
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water
 in filter machine. Moreover
, at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of all processing it provide a pure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 in one other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkettlejarpotcratepacketvessel
container
 by tap.

First
 and foremost, impure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is put
 into metal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkettlejarpotcratepacketvessel
container
 with a top. In the metal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkettlejarpotcratepacketvessel
container
 there are three filtering layers; namely
- sand, charcoal, gravel, in which at the bottom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
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be separated
 by gravel. Secondly
, sand is divided
 at the top of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkettlejarpotcratepacketvessel
container
. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not the least, charcoal should be placed
 at the middle.

Furthermore
, in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkettlejarpotcratepacketvessel
container
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tranfermed
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water
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huje
 jar. Eventually
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 store in this tank and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
easily
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used
 it by tap. 