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The given line graph illustrates the variation in crime rates in three different areas of crimes in Newport city in between 2003 to 2012.

The given line graph illustrates the variation in crime rates in three different areas of crimes in Newport city in between 2003 to 2012. GrQpL
Overall, there was drastic decline in the rate of burglary and the number for car theft became highest at the end of period. While the figure for robbery remained almost steady all over the decade. The rate of burglary ranked in first position accounting slightly less than 3500 in 2001 while the rate started to decline after slight increased in 2004. The data reached to around 1600 in 2007 and the rate kept fluctuating for few years and remained steady reaching 1400 in 2012. Similarly, the number for car theft ranked in second after burglary comprising near to 2700 in 2003. The amount for car theft fluctuate for few consecutive years reaching 2300 in 2007. However, the car theft rate soared up in following years reaching around 3000 in 2012. Furthermore, the figure for robbery was quite low in comparison to other crimes rate, occupying about 600 in 2003. The trend for robbery did not experienced any drastic changes all over the period. The number of robbery hit around 600 in both 2007 and 2012 years even after slight fluctuation.
Overall
, there was drastic decline in the
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rate
of burglary and the number for
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car
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theft
became highest at the
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end
of period. While the figure for
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robbery
remained almost steady all over the decade.

The
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rate
of burglary ranked in
first
position accounting
slightly
less than 3500 in 2001 while the
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rate
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started
to decline after slight increased in 2004. The data reached to around 1600 in 2007 and the
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rate
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kept
fluctuating for few years and remained steady reaching 1400 in 2012.
Similarly
, the number for
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car
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theft
ranked in second after burglary comprising near to 2700 in 2003. The amount for
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car
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theft
fluctuate for few consecutive years reaching 2300 in 2007.
However
, the
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car
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theft
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rate
soared up in following years reaching around 3000 in 2012.

Furthermore
, the figure for
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robbery
was quite low
in comparison
to other crimes
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rate
, occupying about 600 in 2003. The trend for
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robbery
did not
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experienced
any drastic
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changes
all over the period. The number of
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robbery
hit around 600 in both 2007 and 2012 years even after slight fluctuation.
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IELTS academic The given line graph illustrates the variation in crime rates in three different areas of crimes in Newport city in between 2003 to 2012.

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