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The given line graph illustrates the number of people in two different countries India and China from the year 2000 and the estimated population until 2050.

The given line graph illustrates the number of people in two different countries India and China from the year 2000 and the estimated population until 2050. 9QeN0
The given line graph illustrates the number of people in two different countries India and China from the year 2000 and the estimated population until 2050. Overall, as can be seen from the graph that there is an upward trend for two countries during the period shown. Also the number of people in India increase dramatically, while people dwelling in China falls steadily In 2000, the figure for people locating in India was 1 billion, whereas there was around 1. 25 billion people living in China at the same time. After 30 years the number of population in both countries are expected to climb strongly and reach at approximately
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China from the year 2000 and the estimated population until 2050.

Overall
, as can be
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from the graph that there is an upward trend for two countries

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during
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Also
the number of
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people
in India increase
dramatically
,
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while


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people
dwelling in China falls
steadily


In 2000, the figure for
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people
locating in India was 1 billion, whereas there was around

1. 25 billion
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people
living in China at the same time. After 30 years the number
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of


population in both countries are
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expected
to climb
strongly
and reach at approximately
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IELTS academic The given line graph illustrates the number of people in two different countries India and China from the year 2000 and the estimated population until 2050.

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7 paragraphs
108 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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