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Human activities have had negative impact on plants and animals around

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Human activities have had negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed, while other believes action can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion. With the advancement of technology and science, humans have started ruling all over the world. They are depleting all the natural resources like fossil fuels, plants, animals, and many others for their own needs. Some people are in favor of this and opine that in the race of growth there will be some losses too. In my view, I feel that we are the ones who can turn the tables and can get along with flora and fauna without causing any ill effect to them. In my composition, I will be putting light on both views. In the contemporary world, people are becoming selfish and showing no responsibility towards nature. The increase in pollution, deforestation, use of non-biodegradable products, animal poaching, etc. are some major issues currently faced by us and due to which we are having a devastating impact on our natural diversity. However, we can take small steps like growing more and more plants, banning products which are made from animal skins such as leather, reducing the usage of paper and plastic, etc. I would like to quote an issue which is under limelight recently, diamonds are found in one of the forest in India for which the whole forest has to be destructed. I believe that this can be avoided as we don't need diamonds but plants and animals for sustainable living. On the contrary, other viewpoint is that with the increase in population and demand we have to sacrifice our environment. We need land to live in, we need plastic for daily use and other things that cannot be altered currently which in turn will impact our nature. To conclude, I would like to highlight that by innovatively using human minds we can develop alternatives that will not have any negative impact on our flora and fauna. We must save them as they give us so much and without them, our lives won't be possible on this planet.

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 on our flora and fauna. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
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 much and without them, our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
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