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The given line graph gives information about how the oil was produced and consumed by the Chinese people from 1982 to 2006

The given line graph gives information about how the oil was produced and consumed by the Chinese people from 1982 to 2006 x8Qy1
According to the data of the graph, in the first 4 years of the given period, the amount of produced oil experienced a minimal growth of 1 million of oil barriers per day, while consumed oil remained the same at around 1. 8 million. On the other hand, from 1986 to 1994, China was unable to produce the bigger amount of oil, which stayed unchanged at 3 million oil barriers per day. Nevertheless, Chinese people consumed more oil than produced it. As can be observed in the line graph, oil consumption increased remarkably from around 1. 8 million to around 3. 5 million during the next 8 years of the period. Furthermore, between 1994 and 1998 witnessed a gradual climb of around 0. 4 million barriers per day in both produced oil and consumed oil in China. In addition, a marginal rise in oil production of around 0. 3 million can still be seen in the next 8 years. However, the amount of oil that consumed by Chinese people increased dramatically ( from 4 million to more than 6 million ) before staying at the top position in the year 2006
According to the data of the graph, in the
first
4 years of the
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given
period, the amount of produced
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oil
experienced a minimal growth of 1
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million
of
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oil
barriers per day, while
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consumed
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oil
remained the same at
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around
1. 8
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million
.
On the other hand
, from 1986 to 1994, China was unable to produce the bigger amount of
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oil
, which stayed unchanged at 3
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million
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oil
barriers per day.
Nevertheless
, Chinese
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people
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consumed
more
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oil
than produced it. As can
be observed
in the line graph,
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oil
consumption increased
remarkably
from
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around
1. 8
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million
to
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around
3. 5
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million
during the
next
8 years of the period.

Furthermore
, between 1994 and 1998 witnessed a gradual climb of
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around
0. 4
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million
barriers per day in both produced
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oil
and
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consumed
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oil
in China.
In addition
, a marginal rise in
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oil
production of
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around
0. 3
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million
can
still
be
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seen
in the
next
8 years.
However
, the amount of
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oil
that
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consumed
by Chinese
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people
increased
dramatically
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(
from 4
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million
to more than 6
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million
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)
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before
staying at the top position in the
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year
2006
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IELTS academic The given line graph gives information about how the oil was produced and consumed by the Chinese people from 1982 to 2006

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2 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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