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The graph below shows the consumption and prodcutionof sugar in india from 2001 to 2011.

The graph below shows the consumption and prodcutionof sugar in india from 2001 to 2011. 7378k
The line graph compares the used and manufactured of sugar in India between 2001 and 2011. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the consumption of sugar almost higher, while the production of sugar lower. To begin with, there were around 25 used of sugar in India in 2001. Furthermore, it reached at exactly 25 after two years. In 2005, which drastically declined by 6. In addition, there were roughly 36 consumed of sugar in 2007, which reached at top level. After, it gradually plummeted to more than 16 in 2009. At the end, the used of sugar contain rate surged up and accounted by 30. On the flip side, the manufactured of sugar counted at more than 25 in 2001. Moreover, this rate remained same in following next 4 years. Additionally, this ratio suddenly shoot up steadily till the 2011. Which accounted to be 25, 29, and nearby 30, respectivelly.
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that the consumption of
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almost higher, while the production of
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lower. To
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in India in 2001.
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in 2007, which reached at
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of
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contain rate surged up and accounted by 30. On the flip side, the manufactured of
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counted at more than 25 in 2001.
Moreover
, this rate remained same in following
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4 years.
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till the 2011. Which accounted to be 25, 29, and nearby 30,
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