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Describe the process of growing bananas

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The diagram illustrates the process of growing bananas for selling in supermarkets. Overall, it can be obverse that there are seven stages beginning with growing and ending with displaying on the stalls in supermarket for customers. First of all, the banana trees are grown around 9 months to 1 years in either sunny day with 25-30 degree or long rainy day. After that, when the banana is still green, it is picked to become to checking stage. The bananas are classified, the bad ones are throwing away and the left is stored in 13. 3 degree and shipped to fridge where the bananas are ripped and be yellow. Follow this comes to delivery stage. The ripped bananas are put in lorries and delivered to supermarket. Finally, customers buy bananas when they are seeing in the stall.
The diagram illustrates the process of growing bananas for selling in supermarkets.

Overall
, it can be obverse that there are seven stages beginning with growing and ending with displaying on the stalls in supermarket for customers.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the banana trees
are grown
around 9 months to 1 years in either sunny day with 25-30 degree or long rainy day. After that, when the banana is
still
green, it
is picked
to become to checking stage. The bananas
are classified
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
ones are throwing away and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
is stored
in 13. 3 degree and shipped to fridge where the bananas
are ripped
and be yellow.

Follow this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to delivery stage. The ripped bananas
are put
in lorries and delivered to supermarket.
Finally
, customers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
bananas when they are seeing in the stall.
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IELTS academic Describe the process of growing bananas

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  American English
4 paragraphs
136 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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