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The given line chars provide information about the relation between having various household machines and the amount of housework hours in families of one nation over a century, starting from 1920.

The given line chars provide information about the relation between having various household machines and the amount of housework hours in families of one nation over a century, starting from 1920. ob3B9
The given line chars provide information about the relation between having various household machines and the amount of housework hours in families of one nation over a century, starting from 1920. From a general perspective, there was an upward trend for the proportions of families having washing machine, freezer, hoover, whereas the figure for housework was negatively correlated. The percentages if refrigerator and vacuum cleaner share the highest position in the period shown. In the year 1920, the quantity of housework hours stood at 50 and began to decrease moderately to 20, about 2 times smaller than that for the beginning after 40 years. From the year 1960 onwards, the time for housework continued its downward trend steadily and slightly followed by reach the bottom at 10 in the year 2019 As it can be seen from the other chart, the figures for washing machine, hoover, started at 40 and 30 in turn. The year 1960 marks the point at which the figure for vacuum cleaner overtook that for washing machine and continued to increase significantly to reach the plateau at 100 in the year 200 onwards. However, the rate of household having freezer reached the highest position in the year 1980, 10 years sooner than that for hoover, after rocketing from the zero start to 90 in the year 1960
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and the amount of
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housework
hours in families of one nation over a century, starting from 1920.

From a general perspective, there was an upward trend for the proportions of families having washing
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machine
, freezer, hoover, whereas the figure for
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housework
was
negatively
correlated. The percentages if refrigerator and vacuum cleaner share the highest position in the period shown.

In the
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year
1920, the quantity of
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housework
hours stood at 50 and began to decrease
moderately
to 20, about 2 times smaller than that for the beginning after 40 years. From the
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year
1960 onwards, the time for
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housework
continued its downward trend
steadily
and
slightly
followed by reach the bottom at 10 in the
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year
2019

As it can be
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seen
from the other chart, the figures for washing
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machine
, hoover,
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started
at 40 and 30 in turn. The
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year
1960 marks the point at which the figure for vacuum cleaner overtook that for washing
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machine
and continued to increase
significantly
to reach the plateau at 100 in the
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year
200 onwards.
However
, the rate of household having freezer reached the highest position in the
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year
1980, 10 years sooner than that for hoover, after rocketing from the zero
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start
to 90 in the
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year
1960
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IELTS academic The given line chars provide information about the relation between having various household machines and the amount of housework hours in families of one nation over a century, starting from 1920.

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6.5
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