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The chart illustrates data on how much percentage of people divorced in 2 nordic nations over the half decade period between 2011 and 2015.

The chart illustrates data on how much percentage of people divorced in 2 nordic nations over the half decade period between 2011 and 2015. 5BDYm
The chart illustrates data on how much percentage of people divorced in 2 nordic nations over the half decade period between 2011 and 2015. Overall, there is an upward trend in the divorce rate of Finland while the opposite was true the figure for Sweed. Another interesting point had been in 2012 which the figure for Finland experienced low this year while that for Sweeden saw a peak point. It can be seen from the char is that at the beginning of the period the rate for Finland made up approximately 38% compared to about 44% for Sweeden. in the following year figure saw decrease to almost 33% before reaching slightly under 40% in 2013. at the end of the last 2 years rate account for just over two-fifth%When it comes to the pattern for Sweden despite starting at nearly 44% in 2011 it decreased steadily until the end of the period before reaching its peak point at just under half in 2012. Next year, the trend declined to about 46% followed by almost 45% in 2014. At the end of the period, the figure for Sweeden took up nearly 37% with 4% low in comparison to that for Finland.
The chart illustrates data on how much percentage of
people
divorced in 2
nordic
nations over the half decade
period
between 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, there is an upward trend in the divorce rate of Finland while the opposite was true the
figure
for
Sweed
. Another interesting point had been in 2012 which the
figure
for Finland experienced low this
year
while that for
Sweeden
saw
a peak point. It can be
seen
from the char is that at the beginning of the
period
the rate for Finland made up approximately 38% compared to about 44% for
Sweeden
.
in
the following
year
figure
saw
decrease to almost 33%
before
reaching
slightly
under 40% in 2013.
at
the
end
of the last 2 years rate account for
just
over
two-fifth%When
it
comes
to the pattern for Sweden despite starting at
nearly
44% in 2011 it decreased
steadily
until the
end
of the
period
before
reaching its peak point at
just
under half in 2012.
Next
year
, the trend declined to about 46% followed by almost 45% in 2014. At the
end
of the
period
, the
figure
for
Sweeden
took up
nearly
37% with 4% low
in comparison
to that for Finland.
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