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The given illustrations delineates how the coastal village has changed from 1995 till now.

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The given illustrations delineates how the coastal village has changed from 1995 till now. By and large, it is evident that the housing area was expanded with better facilities and transportation routes. An in-depth look at the map in 1995 reveals that the housing area located at the northwest of the layout was increased in the number of houses. In addition, a new street has been built across a housing area in the west with two more houses along the side. To the northest of the village, the farmland and forest park were demolished to make way for golf and tennis zone. The chains of shops were currently superseded by restaurants in the southwest part. With regard to the fish market which oppose the shop in 1995, was renovated and then made into apartments. Finally, the fishing port could be found in the sea was removed and a new car park was added beside the hotel in the east of the village.
The
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given
illustrations delineates how the coastal village has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
from 1995 till
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now
.

By and large, it is evident that the housing area
was expanded
with better facilities and transportation routes.

An in-depth look at the map in 1995 reveals that the housing area located at the northwest of the layout
was increased
in the number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
.
In addition
, a new street has
been built
across a housing area in the west with two more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
along the side. To the
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northest
of the village, the farmland and forest park
were demolished
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
way for golf and tennis zone. The chains of shops were
currently
superseded by restaurants in the southwest part.

With regard to the fish market which oppose the shop in 1995,
was renovated
and then made into apartments.
Finally
, the fishing port could
be found
in the sea
was removed
and a new car park was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
beside the hotel in the east of the village.
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IELTS academic The given illustrations delineates how the coastal village has changed from 1995 till now.

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