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Given is the bar chart showing the different factors that influence the work productivity of two separated age groups, namely 18-30 and 45-60

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Given is the bar chart showing the different factors that influence the work productivity of two separated age groups, namely 18-30 and 45-60 Overall, it is clear from the bar chart that the age group of 18-30 is more likely to be affected by the elements than the other. In addition, money is one of the most essential factors for both elderly and young people. A more detailed look at the provided graph reveals that there are two contributors, namely money and team spirit are considered as crucial factors for both age groups with 60 and 70 workers respectively. Furthermore, some elements such as chance for personal development, relaxed working environment and promotion prospects play an essential role in younger age group, which influences about 90, 85 and 80 people, while the figure for the workers of the 45-60 are just 40, 30 and 50. When it comes to the number of people that are affected by the working environment, there are only 40 workers for the young and old age groups combined. Another point is that job security is the factor that only impacts on 20 dwellers in 45-60 age group, while younger people pay much attention to this element with the number of 40.

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