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The given graphs delineate the proportion of electrical devices owners and the number of hours which spent for doing housekeeping weekly in a nation from 1920 to 2019

The given graphs delineate the proportion of electrical devices owners and the number of hours which spent for doing housekeeping weekly in a nation from 1920 to 2019 paeX9

The given graphs delineate the proportion of electrical devices owners and the number of hours which spent for doing housekeeping weekly in a nation from 1920 to 2019 Overall, it is evident that the tools belong to household of this country showed an upward trend, whereas a reserve pattern could be observed in the amount of time using for housework over the years shown. In 1920, the rate of the ownership refrigerator was lowest, at roughly 1%. This is followed by a sudden rise to 90% in 1960 and reached a peak at 100% in 1980 till the end of the period. The figure for those in term of washing machine and vacuum cleaner were higher at the beginning at exactly 40% and 30%, respectively. These percentages were then boomed to about 75% and 100% in 2019 With regard to the assist of labour-saving household gadget, the amount of dull time dedicated to do housework was obviously reduced. In 1920, doing housekeeping account for 50 hours each week and this number saw over a halve at 20% in the year 1960. There was a slightly decline then in this figure at about 11% till the end of the period shown.

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given
 graphs delineate the proportion of electrical devices owners and the number of hours which spent for doing housekeeping weekly in a nation from 1920 to 2019

Overall
, it is evident that the tools belong to household of this country This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 an upward trend, whereas a reserve pattern could be observed
 in the amount of time using for housework over the years shown.

In 1920, the rate of the ownership refrigerator was lowest, at roughly 1%. This is followed
 by a sudden rise to 90% in 1960 and reached a peak at 100% in 1980 till the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period. The figure for those in term of washing machine and vacuum cleaner were higher at the beginning at exactly 40% and 30%, respectively
. These percentages were then boomed to about 75% and 100% in 2019

With regard to the assist of Possible spelling mistake found.laborsaving
labour-saving
 household gadget, the amount of dull time dedicated to do housework was obviously
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
. In 1920, doing housekeeping account for 50 hours each week and this number This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 over a The word "a" is a verb. Did you mean "half"?half
halve
 at 20% in the year 1960. There was a You used an adverb ('slightly') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
slightly decline
 then in this figure at about 11% till the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period shown. 