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The graph below represents the amounts of products and services delivered in the United Kingdom using various means of transportation from 1974 to 2004. Overall, there was a growth in the amount of goods transported in 4 types, whereas pipeline transit remained the least popular form of transportation throughout 30 years. In addition, there was a increasing the most products were moved by road between these period In 1974 the figure for the amounts of products are transported by road and water was occupied around 40% and 65% respectively. the percentage of goods travelled on overland routes jumped to 80% in 1990, before ending and reaching a peak at under 100% in the final term. In addition, around 60% is the propotion of product transported by sea, this figure remain during the period from 1982 to 1994, before ending at over 40% in the final period. With regards to the proportions of visitors making a trip to aquarium and festival, At the beginning of 1974, Pipeline increased in 1982 to almost 20 million tonnes and still maintained the same level from 1982 to 1990 and between 1990 to 1994 decreased slowly. An opposite trend can be observed for the goods transported using rail. In 1974, it was exactly 40 million tonnes and declined to about 30 million tonnes in 1984. It then showed a fluctuation pattern from 1984 to 1995. It rose considerably until the year 2002 and reached its peak at just over 40 million tonnes.

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