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The given graph shows the past and projected figures of the government spending as a percentage of GDP for the years 2000 to 2025 in three areas.

The given graph shows the past and projected figures of the government spending as a percentage of GDP for the years 2000 to 2025 in three areas. 3aAAJ
The information about the proportion of GDP of the regime's investments in the three areas: education, health and roads and railways from 2000 to the predicted year 2025, is illustrated by the assigned line graph. Overall, it can be explicitly observed that the government spent more money on health care services than education and railways assistance from 2000 to 2020. Moreover, it is expected that the percentage of utilization of GDP would raise in health; however, the lowest amount will spend on education and rail systems. To commence with, the percentage of expenditures of GDP on health increased sharply from 4. 00% to 6. 50% over the period of 20 years from 2000. It is projected that the spending on health care services would be grown by 1. 50% in 2025. There was a gradual decline in the invested funds of GDP on education systems was by 1. 00%, which will reach at 4. 00% until 2025. Probing further, in road and railways services, the utilization of money inclined slightly and reached at 4. 50% between 2000 and 2005. While the percentage of authorities investments on roads systems was dropped at 3. 00% in 2010, it rose moderately by 1. 00% till 2020. The invested funds of gross domestic products would 3. 50% on roads and railways in 2025, it is estimated.
The information about the proportion of GDP of the regime's investments in the three areas:
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education
,
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health
and
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roads
and
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railways
from 2000 to the predicted year 2025,
is illustrated
by the assigned line graph.

Overall
, it can be
explicitly
observed that the
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government
spent more money on
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health
care services than
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education
and
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railways
assistance from 2000 to 2020.
Moreover
, it is
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expected
that the percentage of utilization of GDP would raise in
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health
;
however
, the lowest amount will spend on
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education
and rail systems.

To commence with, the percentage of expenditures of GDP on
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health
increased
sharply
from 4. 00% to 6. 50% over the period of 20 years from 2000. It
is projected
that the spending on
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health
care services would
be grown
by 1. 50% in 2025. There was a gradual decline in the invested funds of GDP on
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education
systems was by 1. 00%, which will reach at 4. 00% until 2025.

Probing
further
, in
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road
and
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railways
services, the utilization of money inclined
slightly
and reached at 4. 50% between 2000 and 2005.
“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
the percentage of authorities investments on
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roads
systems
was dropped
at 3. 00% in 2010, it rose
moderately
by 1. 00% till 2020. The invested funds of gross domestic products would 3. 50% on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roads
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
railways
in 2025, it
is estimated
.
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IELTS academic The given graph shows the past and projected figures of the government spending as a percentage of GDP for the years 2000 to 2025 in three areas.

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