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The given graph shows the past and projected figures of the government spending as a percentage of GDP for the years 2000 to 2025 in three areas.

The given graph shows the past and projected figures of the government spending as a percentage of GDP for the years 2000 to 2025 in three areas. 3aAAJ

The information about the proportion of GDP of the regime's investments in the three areas: education, health and roads and railways from 2000 to the predicted year 2025, is illustrated by the assigned line graph. Overall, it can be explicitly observed that the government spent more money on health care services than education and railways assistance from 2000 to 2020. Moreover, it is expected that the percentage of utilization of GDP would raise in health; however, the lowest amount will spend on education and rail systems. To commence with, the percentage of expenditures of GDP on health increased sharply from 4. 00% to 6. 50% over the period of 20 years from 2000. It is projected that the spending on health care services would be grown by 1. 50% in 2025. There was a gradual decline in the invested funds of GDP on education systems was by 1. 00%, which will reach at 4. 00% until 2025. Probing further, in road and railways services, the utilization of money inclined slightly and reached at 4. 50% between 2000 and 2005. While the percentage of authorities investments on roads systems was dropped at 3. 00% in 2010, it rose moderately by 1. 00% till 2020. The invested funds of gross domestic products would 3. 50% on roads and railways in 2025, it is estimated.

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education
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health
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
 from 2000 to the predicted year 2025, is illustrated
 by the assigned line graph.

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government
 spent more money on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenergystrengthwell-beingfitness
health
 care services than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
 assistance from 2000 to 2020. Moreover
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 that the percentage of utilization of GDP would raise in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenergystrengthwell-beingfitness
health
; however
, the lowest amount will spend on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 and rail systems.

To commence with, the percentage of expenditures of GDP on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenergystrengthwell-beingfitness
health
 increased sharply
 from 4. 00% to 6. 50% over the period of 20 years from 2000. It is projected
 that the spending on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenergystrengthwell-beingfitness
health
 care services would be grown
 by 1. 50% in 2025. There was a gradual decline in the invested funds of GDP on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 systems was by 1. 00%, which will reach at 4. 00% until 2025.

Probing further
, in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
 services, the utilization of money inclined slightly
 and reached at 4. 50% between 2000 and 2005. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 the percentage of authorities investments on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 systems was dropped
 at 3. 00% in 2010, it rose moderately
 by 1. 00% till 2020. The invested funds of gross domestic products would 3. 50% on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
 in 2025, it is estimated
. 