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The given graph show the information about the use of renewable energy for the accounting of total energy from 1971 to 1991.

The given graph show the information about the use of renewable energy for the accounting of total energy from 1971 to 1991. mXd51
The rendered line graph delineate the information about the ratio of renewable energy resources of total energy in between 1971 and 2006. It is crystal clear from the line graph, the highest percentage of renewable energy which was used in Finland. That was approximately 25%. While, 15% energy was consumed in Denmark in year 1971. The least energy was used in United Kingdom and United States. Which was below 5% in the same year. However, 20% of renewable energy utilized in Denmark from 1976 to 1991. As the rest data shows, the usage of energy in Germany and France remained stable in 1991. That was used at 10%. Whereas, 25% energy was cobsumed in Finland. Thw consumption of renewable energy in Denmark and Germany was 15%. The minimum percentile of energy consumed by United Kingdom. It was reached only under 5%. Overall, it is clear that the maximum percentage of renewable energy used in Finland and Denmark in the given time period.
The rendered line graph delineate the information about the ratio of
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renewable
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resources of total
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energy
in between 1971 and 2006. It is crystal
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clear
from the line graph, the highest percentage of
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renewable
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energy
which was
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used
in Finland. That was approximately 25%.
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, 15%
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energy
was consumed
in Denmark in year 1971. The least
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energy
was
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used
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in United Kingdom
and United States.
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was below 5% in the same year.
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, 20% of
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renewable
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energy
utilized in Denmark from 1976 to 1991. As the rest data
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shows
, the usage of
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energy
in Germany and France remained stable in 1991. That was
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used
at 10%.
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, 25%
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energy
was
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cobsumed
in Finland.
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consumption of
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renewable
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energy
in Denmark and Germany was 15%. The minimum percentile of
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energy
consumed
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by United Kingdom
. It
was reached
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only
under 5%.
Overall
, it is
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clear
that the maximum percentage of
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renewable
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energy
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used
in Finland and Denmark in the
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given
time period.
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IELTS academic The given graph show the information about the use of renewable energy for the accounting of total energy from 1971 to 1991.

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