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The line chart illustrates that the propotion of Internet users in three different nations since 1999 to 2000.

The line chart illustrates that the propotion of Internet users in three different nations since 1999 to 2000. O6e1k

The line chart illustrates that the proportion of Internet users in three different nations since 1999 to 2000. We can observe that from the first year to the last, all three countries increased the number of people used internet. The Canadian used internet in total reached the highest point after twenty years from 1999. When compared the number of USA, Canada users of internet were nearly the same over the ten-year period. Not only the number of people who use the internet of both nations went up about 25 percent (reached 70% and 75% in 2009 respectively). But they also were identical in two time in 2002 and 2005. In 1999, The number of users in Mexico, Canada, and USA nations were not much distinctive at 2 percent, 3 percent, and 10 percent respectively.

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 nations since 1999 to 2000.

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number
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used
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 internet in total reached the highest point after twenty years from 1999.

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, Canada users of internet were nearly
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use
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 (reached 70% and 75% in 2009 respectively
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 were identical in two time in 2002 and 2005.

In 1999, The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
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percent
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