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The diagram illustrates the current plan of a civic centre, as well as the plan after changes.

The diagram illustrates the current plan of a civic centre, as well as the plan after changes. y78bM

The diagram illustrates the current plan of a civic centre, as well as the plan after changes. Overall, most buildings will be used for different purposes in the future. In addition, the council office will be enlargened to be utilized as an open park and an underground car park. The current map shows 2 car parks, one of which is to the top left of the map, while the other is on the right side next to a shopping center. A relatively large concert hall is located between these car parks. Furthermore, an exhibition hall, a council office, and a library occupy the bottom half of the picture. The civic centre is planned to undergo dramatic changes. The first car park will be converted into a theatre, while the other is planned to be used as hotel and restaurant. The library will function as an exhibition hall in the future, meanwhile, the council office will be moved to that hall's building. Additionally, the building of council office will be demolished to build a new open park above an underground car park.

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current
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, as well
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changes
.

Overall
, most buildings will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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different
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, the council You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
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enlargened
 to be utilized
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park
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car
 park.

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current
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shows
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car
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parks
, one of which is to the top This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of the map, while the other is on the right side next
 to a shopping center. A relatively
 large concert hall is located
 between these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
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parks
. Furthermore
, an exhibition hall, a council You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
, and a library occupy the bottom half of the picture.

The civic Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
is planned
 to undergo dramatic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
. The first
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car
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park
 will be converted
 into a Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
, while the other is planned
 to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as hotel and restaurant. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 library will function as an exhibition hall in the future, meanwhile, the council You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to that hall's building. Additionally
, the building of council You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 will be demolished
 to build a new open You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 above an underground You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
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park
. 