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The table below show the changes in the size of West Farm and in the value of the land per hectare over a period of 90 years from 1900 to 1990.

The table below show the changes in the size of West Farm and in the value of the land per hectare over a period of 90 years from 1900 to 1990. 30kwn
The map describes the adjustment in the size of West Farm and the value of each hectare from 1900 to 1990. It can be seen clearly that the dimension of the farm seemed to fluctuate during the given time; meanwhile, the value showed an opposite trend. On one hand, the size of West Farm gave an impression of being vacillated during the given time. In the early years, the dimension hit its peaks at 5, 000 hectares and suddenly fell to 850 hectares in 1925. However, an increase by two times was recorded in 1940; subsequently, a slump of 1, 200 hectares occurred in 1970. Eventually, the number continued to rise to 35, 500 in 1990. On the other hand, the value of the land per hectares was seen to increase continuously during the given period. Precisely, from 1900 to 1940, the price for each hectare went up slightly at different point of time; with a dollar, 20 dollars and 25 dollars respectively. Moreover, the number was described to rocket up to 100 dollars in 1970 and peaked at 125 dollars in the last year. In conclusion, it can be observed that although the size of West Farm showed a volatile trend; whilst the prices of the land for each hectares ascended progressively during the given time.
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describes
the adjustment in the size of West
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Farm
and the value of each hectare from 1900 to 1990. It can be
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seen
clearly
that the dimension of the
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farm
seemed to fluctuate during the
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given
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time
; meanwhile, the value
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showed
an opposite trend.

On one hand, the size of West
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Farm
gave an impression of
being vacillated
during the
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given
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time
. In the early years, the dimension hit its peaks at 5, 000 hectares and
suddenly
fell to 850 hectares in 1925.
However
, an increase by two
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times
was recorded
in 1940;
subsequently
, a slump of 1, 200 hectares occurred in 1970.
Eventually
, the number continued to rise to 35, 500 in 1990.

On the other hand
, the value of the land per hectares was
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seen
to increase
continuously
during the
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given
period.
Precisely
, from 1900 to 1940, the price for each hectare went up
slightly
at
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different
point of
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time
; with a
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dollar
, 20
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dollars
and 25
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dollars
respectively
.
Moreover
, the number was
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described
to rocket up to 100
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dollars
in 1970 and peaked at 125
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dollars
in the last year.

In conclusion
, it can
be observed
that although the size of West
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Farm
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showed
a volatile trend; whilst the prices of the land for each
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hectares
ascended
progressively
during the
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given
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IELTS academic The table below show the changes in the size of West Farm and in the value of the land per hectare over a period of 90 years from 1900 to 1990.

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