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The picture below shows how credit card transaction are carried out. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main future, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture below shows how credit card transaction are carried out. raRXJ
The given flow chart describe how a credit card transaction is carried out at a retail outlet between a merchant and a customer. The first step, the card is swiped at an electronic machine at the vendor. The information about the swipe then goes directly to the credit cared company and form that, it is forwarded electronically to the issuing bank of verification. Once the verification is over, a conformation is sent from the bank to the credit card company, which passes on the same to the merchant’s outlet where the swipe machine is located and the transaction is complete. Secondly, the issuing bank then transfers the money from the customers account to the merchants bank account. However, the issuing bank deducts the transaction charges from the amount and also transfers the same to the credit card company as par their internal business agreement. After that the merchants bank credits the same amount in the merchants bank account.
The
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given
flow chart
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describe
how a
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credit
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card
transaction
is carried
out at a retail outlet between a
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merchant
and a customer.

The
first
step, the
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card
is swiped
at an electronic machine at the vendor.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
information about the swipe then goes
directly
to the
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credit
cared
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company
and form that, it
is forwarded
electronically
to the issuing
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bank
of verification. Once the verification is over, a conformation is
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sent
from the
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bank
to the
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credit
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card
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company
, which passes on the same to the
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merchant’s
outlet where the swipe machine
is located
and the transaction is complete.

Secondly
, the issuing
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bank
then transfers the money from the customers account to the
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merchants
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bank
account.
However
, the issuing
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bank
deducts the transaction charges from the amount and
also
transfers the same to the
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credit
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card
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
as par their internal business agreement.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
that the
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merchants
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bank
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credits
the same amount in the
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merchants
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bank
account.
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IELTS academic The picture below shows how credit card transaction are carried out.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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