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The line graph shows how the population of the three countries changes between 1950 and 2050.

The line graph shows how the population of the three countries changes between 1950 and 2050. Overall, USA had far higher population than Nigeria and Japan and the population growth between 1950 and 2025 is considerably higher. In 1950, the population of Nigeria was around 50 million, the lowest among the three countries. Japan had a population of 100 million while USA had 175 million inhabitants, the highest among these countries. By 2000, the population of Nigeria, gradually increasing, was equal to Japan. The graph predicts that by the 2030s, Nigeria will overtake the United States and its population will be over 400 million people. Finally, in 2050, Nigeria and USA will accommodate roughly 600 and 500 million people, a noticeable growth than that of the last five decades. In this year, Japan’s population will decrease by about 100 million people from 150, which were in the 2000s.
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of the three countries
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between 1950 and 2050.
Overall
, USA had far higher
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population
than Nigeria and
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Japan
and the
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growth between 1950 and 2025 is
considerably
higher.

In 1950, the
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of Nigeria was around 50
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million
, the lowest among the three countries.
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Japan
had a
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population
of 100
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million
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had 175
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million
inhabitants, the highest among these countries. By 2000, the
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population
of Nigeria,
gradually
increasing, was equal to
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Japan
. The graph predicts that by the 2030s, Nigeria will overtake the United States and its
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population
will be over 400
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million
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people
.

Finally
, in 2050, Nigeria and USA will accommodate roughly 600 and 500
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million
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people
, a noticeable growth than that of the last five decades. In this year,
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Japan’s
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population
will decrease by about 100
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million
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people
from 150, which were in the 2000s.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows how the population of the three countries changes between 1950 and 2050.

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148 words
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