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THE PIE CHART BELOW SHOW THAT THE OIL USE OF MAJOR CONSUMERS IN FOUR DIFFERENT COUNTRIES BETWEEN 2009 TO 2030.

THE PIE CHART BELOW SHOW THAT THE OIL USE OF MAJOR CONSUMERS IN FOUR DIFFERENT COUNTRIES BETWEEN 2009 TO 2030. GLyEx
THE PIE CHART ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF OIL USE IN 4 DIFFERENT COUNTRIES OVER A PERIOD OF 21 YEARS. OVERALL, IT IS MANIFEST FROM THE PIE CHART THAT THE RATIO OF OIL UTILIZE IN US WAS THE HIGHEST AMONG OTHER COUNTRIES, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF OIL USE IN MIDDLE EAST WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE GIVEN PERIOD. INITIATING AT 4 MILLIONS IN 2009 AND DECREASE TO 3 MILLIONS IN 2015, THE AVERAGE OF OIL UTILIZE IN WESTERN EUROPE AND JAPAN SLIGHTLY DECLINE BY 2. 5 MILLIONS IN 2025. ALTHOUGH CHINA HAD ONLY 2 MILLIONS IN 2009 AND INCREASING TO 3 MILLIONS IN 2015, THE VALUE OF OIL USE IN CHINA ELEVATION BY 4 MILLIONS IN 2025. LIKEWISE, THE QUANTITY OF OIL UTILIZE IN US WAS THE GROWEST CONSEQUENTLY, 10 MILLIONS IN 2009 AND SAME VALUE IN 2015 AND NEXT YEAR THAT VALUE IMMENSELY FALL TO 6 MILLIONS IN 2025. HOWEVER, THE NUMBER OF OIL USE IN MIDDLE EAST WAS 2 MILLIONS IN 2009 AND SLIGHTLY RISE TO 2. 2 MILLIONS IN 2015, NEXT YEAR THAT RATIO THEN SLOWLY EXTENSION BY 2. 5 MILLIONS IN 2025. MOREOVER, LAST YEAR THE PROPORTION OF OIL UTILIZE IN US DROP TO 4 MILLIONS IN 2030 AND THAT VALUE IN WESTERN EUROPE AND JAPAN SLOWLY FALL BY 2 MILLIONS IN 2030. SUBSEQUENTLY, LAST YEAR IN 2030, THE DIGIT OF OIL USE IN CHINA SLIGHTLY WENT DOWN TO 3. 8 MILLIONS AND IN MIDDLE EAST THAT VALUE WAS SLOWLY GROW BY 3 MILLIONS IN 2030.
THE PIE CHART ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF
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