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Diagram of water cycle. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Diagram of water cycle. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant. kxnAR
The diagram explains the water cycle in nature. The sun's heat through radiation heats up the water on earth. This causes evaporation. For instance, water from vegetation, soil, from leave through transpiration and from other sources escape. The maximum evaporation occurs from the large surface area of the seas and oceans. Following this, the evaporated water from clouds along with the dust particles. Further, these clouds are pulled up by the winds to a higher altitude. As a consequence of low pressure and temperature the clouds condense in form of rains. This is usually termed as precipitation. Withe rains, the earth regains the water. The water bodies such a rivers, lakes, and sea receive water. From rivers as well as other surfaces, the water flows downstream back to the sea whereas some of the water percolates into the soil which is stored as ground water. As seen, trees also help to increase the percolation and infiltration thus enriching the amount of ground water. the water cycle occurs continuously in nature.
The diagram
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explains
the
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water
cycle in nature.

The sun's heat through radiation heats up the
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water
on earth. This causes evaporation.
For instance
,
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water
from vegetation, soil, from
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leave
through transpiration and from other sources escape. The maximum evaporation occurs from the large surface area of the seas and oceans.

Following this, the evaporated
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water
from clouds along with the dust particles.
Further
, these clouds
are pulled
up by the winds to a higher altitude. As a consequence of low pressure and temperature the clouds condense in form of rains. This is
usually
termed as precipitation.

Withe rains, the earth regains the
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water
. The
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water
bodies such
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a rivers
, lakes, and sea receive
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water
. From rivers
as well
as other surfaces, the
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water
flows downstream back to the sea whereas
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some of the
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water
percolates into the soil which
is stored
as ground
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water
. As
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seen
, trees
also
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help
to increase the percolation and infiltration
thus
enriching the amount of ground water.

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the
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water
cycle occurs
continuously
in nature.
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IELTS academic Diagram of water cycle. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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