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the following chart shows side effect experienced by people vaccinated against covid 19

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The provided bar chart illustrates the common COVID-19 aftereffect experienced in British people. Overall, it can be seen that while the moderate effects were recorded most in people, the reverse is true for the severe ones. Additionally, the figure for fatigue recorded the highest level. As for fatigue, the respective number is seen in mild with 21. 1. The remainder of side effects of 55 aged over is not quite as high as that of 18-55 aged, being 26. 6, 2. 8 compared to 33. 7, 4. 6. Similarly, people who belong to the 18 to 55 age group experienced more moderate effects than mild ones and the same is witnessed in 55 year and over accounting for 12. 2 and 15. 6 respectively. In terms of headache, mild effects are by far the highest, making up 25. 6 for people who fall into 18 to 55 years and 25. 4 for the rest who are 55 and older. The severe effects experienced the least, which is lower than moderate ones. As far as chills concerned, the number of people had mild reactions exceeds that of moderate experience, while the lowest effects was on severe. When it comes to joint pain, the data of 55 over and 18-55 who have shared the same number with 9. 7 and 9. 8 respectively. 11. 2 of all 18-55 who have moderate, as opposed to 8. 7 of 55 over who had moderate.
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