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The given diagrams illustrate the changes to the water supply system in Australia in two different periods ( recently and in the future)

The given diagrams illustrate the changes to the water supply system in Australia in two different periods ( recently and in the future) j8pDa
The given diagrams illustrate the changes to the water supply system in Australia in two different periods ( recently and in the future) Overall, The water supply system in Australia will have considerable changes in the future. The most noticeable different between two maps is the appearance of the recycling process of water for use in the city. Currently, water is stored in a Damand sent to the city for the use of household, shops and factories. The waste water is moved to the water treatment pant to process and then reliased into the river. Whereas, the storm water is released directly into the river from the city. In the near future, water storage in Dam and the usage of water in the city will be remain unchanged. While the storm water and the waste water from the city will be transferred into plant where Both water sources wil be treated and cycled then moved to the city to use for of household, shops and factories. There is no water, realising into the river in the future.
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diagrams illustrate the
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changes
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supply system in Australia in two
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different
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recently and in the future)

Overall
, The
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water
supply system in Australia will have considerable
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changes
in the future. The most noticeable
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different
between two maps is the appearance of the recycling process of
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water
for
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use
in the city.

Currently
,
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water
is stored
in a
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Damand
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sent
to the city for the
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use
of household, shops and factories. The waste
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water
is
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moved
to the
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treatment pant to process and then
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reliased
into the river. Whereas, the storm
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water
is released
directly
into the river from the city.

In the near future,
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water
storage in Dam and the usage of
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water
in the city will be
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and the waste
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water
from the city will
be transferred
into plant where Both
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water
sources
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be treated
and cycled then
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moved
to the city to
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use
for of household, shops and factories. There is no
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water
,
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into the river in the future.
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IELTS academic The given diagrams illustrate the changes to the water supply system in Australia in two different periods ( recently and in the future)

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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